Each manuscript critique is a detailed, written evaluation focusing on substantive elements – plot, character,
pacing, etc. – with suggestions for revising. Writers are welcome to request specific areas of concern they want emphasized
in the report. The critique is at least three pages, usually more, depending on the amount of work required. The critique also includes
a list of minor points and details. If requested by the author, awkward wording, typos and repetitions can be flagged in the actual
manuscript. Critiques are sent by email within 30 days. A rush service can be arranged for authors with time sensitive material.
Query
and Synopsis Critiques
Query letters are selling tools. The focus of the evaluation will be on impact, clarity and choosing key
phrases that will make an editor or agent say yes to your manuscript.
A synopsis critique focuses on clarity. It’s important
that an editor or agent isn’t left with unanswered questions about your story. Emphasis will also be on how well the overall mood,
tone and style of the manuscript is conveyed in the synopsis.
Revised Manuscript Critiques
Valerie will reread material
that has been revised based on her original critique at a reduced fee. The critique will include further suggestions for revision
– if required – and a focus on fine tuning and polishing of the material. If requested by the author, awkward wording, typos and repetitions
will be flagged in the actual manuscript.
Telephone Consultations
Telephone appointments are available to discuss your manuscript
critique. These sessions can offer creative, insightful additions to the written report. Brainstorm revisions, talk about marketing
or discuss ideas for your next novel.
Writers who have not used the critique service are also welcome to book a consultation
for general advice on their writing career, to talk about manuscripts, story ideas, works in progress -- or even to practice “pitching
an editor.” The time is yours!
All telephone consultations are booked in advance for a time and date agreed upon by Valerie and
the author. Valerie makes the call so there are no long distance charges to the author.
If you have any questions about Valerie’s
services or fees please feel free to contact her.